Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent hospital.
Addicts should be locked in prison to block their access to drugs. However, I believe hospital can be a long-term solution as it relieves them.
One the one hand, locking up addicts would restrict them to the prison walls, and they would no longer be able to consume heroine related products. This is because there would be tight security in the jail, and there would be no access to the illegal suppliers of narcotics. For Example, in US, since 2015 drug addicts have been punished by sending them to jail, and this has resulted in 40% decrease in the number of cases of drug addicts. However, I believe even after being released from prison, these people are likely to crave for drugs and would get access to the suppliers.
One the other hand, rehabilitation seems to be a long term solution to this problem, relieving them. Doctors who treat these kinds of patients are trained to wash their brains and teach them about the consequences of taking drugs. If they are treated like victims and supported with love and care, they are more likely to overcome their dependence on these products and leave them forever. This has been proven by a recent study by Oxford University that if drug addiction is treated like an illness, it can be removed completely. Therefore, I believe this is the best method which can eradicate the disease forever.
In conclusion, punishing men and women suffering from the problem of drug addiction by sending them to jail can restrict its consumption temporarily, but treating them with compassion and empathy in hospitals would help them overcome this habit in the long run. It is suggested that understanding them as human beings who actually need help to recover from drug addiction is one of the best choices that can be made by the government.
- The pie chart conveys the total of electricity units produced in France and Australia between 1980 and 2000 categorized by several source of energies 78
- Universities should take the same number of men and women in each major To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- The line chart conveys the proportion of viewers watching Channer one news several times counted in millions 73
- Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole Do you agree or disagree 84
- The demand for food is increasing worldwide Why has it happened What measures could the international community take to improve the situation 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82736156352 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52494898521 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530944625407 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7826965152 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303148997179 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117654428269 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501953884733 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195522633147 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365343468755 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.