Boredom, like any other emotions, is a natural part of our lives and it is likely that everyone gets bored sometimes. While I partly agree that boredom sometimes stems from one's complacency, lack of imagination or self-motivation, there are many other factors why someone may feel their life is dull and one should not feel embarrassed about it.
First of all, it is true that sometimes people may feel complacent with their achievements and stop trying or pushing themselves to overstep new boundaries. It can be a white-collar worker who has finished their nine-to-five job then comes home and just surfs the web for the next few hours. It can also be an athlete who has won the prize a few times, then loses their motivation and hesitates to practice hard. Instead of trying something new like taking on a new sport, reading books, learning new skills, one chooses to be idle and feels bored as a result. This is when boredom roots from idleness and the state of being prosaic.
On the other hand, a person can find his or her life boring if there is limited room for creativity to bloom. One example is when workers assemble electronic components of a phone or computer in a factory. This is a repetitive task that they have to do everyday and follow a strict guideline, which undoubtedly becomes tedious over time but the workers cannot use their creativity to change the process. Another example is when a course is designed to be memory-based, hence the students may find it boring but still have to memorise knowledge to perform well in the exam. In both of these cases, the boring process or course is beyond the workers' and students' control, thus they cannot improve it even when they are creative and self-motivated, and it is clearly not an embarrassment.
Furthermore, a person may fall into a situation that is dreary by its nature. For instance, one may want go on a fishing tour, but the weather is so capricious that there is unexpectedly a downpour. As a consequence, it is much harder to catch a fish and the trip becomes disappointing. Another situation can be when an amusement park does not have many thrilling games, therefore, the visitors may find it boring. There is also nothing to be embarrassed about in these cases.
In addition, boredom is also not a shame but the motivation to create new entertaining activities. Entertainment is born to tackle boredom, hence without dullness, there would be no demand to entertain. For example, computer games are invented for people who do not want to go out but still want to spice up their free time at home. Hiking is for adventurous people who feel bored at home. Going on tours is for people who find staying at one place unexciting and want to experience the world, and many more examples.
In conclusion, boredom can show up at some point in our lives, not as an embarrassment but a stimulus to entertainment. It can originate from idleness, the lack of self-motivation or situations beyond our control; however, we should not let ourselves remain inactive. We should find ways to get out of boredom and spend our time effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... a repetitive task that they have to do everyday and follow a strict guideline, which un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2583.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 540.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78333333333 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85067977357 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509259259259 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 820.8 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6296413004 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.32 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.56 5.21951772744 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177790578779 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502420638902 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590701924151 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100650018567 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069637227545 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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