In Vietnam, some students are now saying that studying ATC program is a bad decision. They think that major is not taught as deeply in economic subjects such as other majors like business administration and international business. However, despite several argument about choosing ATC program, this essay will argue that taking ATC program is one of the best decisions.
First, it can be clearly seen that ATC attendants have the opportunity to work in an international environment. Currently, our country is in the stage of international integration, so it is in dire need of human resources with both professional knowledge and foreign language skills. Therefore, students should consider attending the ATC program to seize a chance working in international environment.
Another advantage of ATC schedule is that the salary that businesses pay ATC students after graduation is highly attractive. According to a survey by Banking Academy in 2021, the average salary of ATC students ranges from 400 USD to 700 USD. For senior positions or global companies, this salary is raised to 1,000USD/month even higher if they are qualified and have a lot of experience.
Finally, some people might say that ATC learners are not allowed to study specialized subjects in economics. They argue that learners can major in economics and then learn English at outside centers. However, ATC students still have a lot of job opportunities in different fields. In ATC program, students can learn many subjects related to banking and finance, import and export, international payments, so after graduation, students are free to choose their profession. Additionally, ATC leaners are also equipped with knowledge of communication skills, presentation skills, analysis and quick problem solving, helping to work effective in their professional fields of using English.
To sum up, studying ATC program brings learners several benefits such as working in international environment, getting high salary, having a lot of job opportunities. From my point of view, entering ATC program is one of the best decisions for students
In Vietnam, some students are now saying that studying ATC program is a bad decision. They think that major is not taught as deeply in economic subjects such as other majors like business administration and international business. However, despite several argument about choosing ATC program, this essay will argue that taking ATC program is one of the best decisions.
First, it can be clearly seen that ATC attendants have the opportunity to work in an international environment. Currently, our country is in the stage of international integration, so it is in dire need of human resources with both professional knowledge and foreign language skills. Therefore, students should consider attending the ATC program to seize a chance working in international environment.
Another advantage of ATC schedule is that the salary that businesses pay ATC students after graduation is highly attractive. According to a survey by Banking Academy in 2021, the average salary of ATC students ranges from 400 USD to 700 USD. For senior positions or global companies, this salary is raised to 1,000USD/month even higher if they are qualified and have a lot of experience.
Finally, some people might say that ATC learners are not allowed to study specialized subjects in economics. They argue that learners can major in economics and then learn English at outside centers. However, ATC students still have a lot of job opportunities in different fields. In ATC program, students can learn many subjects related to banking and finance, import and export, international payments, so after graduation, students are free to choose their profession. Additionally, ATC leaners are also equipped with knowledge of communication skills, presentation skills, analysis and quick problem solving, helping to work effective in their professional fields of using English.
To sum up, studying ATC program brings learners several benefits such as working in international environment, getting high salary, having a lot of job opportunities. From my point of view, entering ATC program is one of the best decisions for students
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun argument seems to be countable; consider using: 'several arguments'.
Suggestion: several arguments
...nternational business. However, despite several argument about choosing ATC program, this essay ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46341463415 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0933029597 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57012195122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1868351006 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407521771774 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136239838927 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140877729962 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236945552879 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.202557725051 0.056905535591 356% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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