It is undeniable that fashion does play a crucial role in our lives . However, there is a wonder that whether or not consumers spend an unnecessarily huge amount of money on these kind of clothing items. This essay will enunciate some of my viewpoints about this opinion.
To commence with, thesedays,fashion trends change at a rapid rate with a plentitude of brand-new tendencies emerging every minute, hence, individuals who have a great ambition for fashion would give all their money to clothing in order to not go out of fashion and keep up with the latest trends. Moreover, owning a fashionable and stylish outfit ,especially one from well-known international brands such as Gucci, Chanel, Elise and so on, would cost buyers a small fortune.Therefore, only a small percentage of global population will be able to afford this trendy and timeless fashion style.
Turning to the other side of the arguement, clothes is considered as an indispensable items whenever we go outside as well as something that would speak volumes about ourselves. For instance a simple person would prefer classic style items, a singer would relish something chic and be created by prominent dessigner labels and a office worker would like smart clothes to get to the company on a daily basis. In addition, on the grounds that there is a variety of fashion styles, people who have similar taste of fashion can easily make friends and expand their circle of peers. For instance, many cosplay clubs and flatforms have been founded on the internet and media networking sites with a view to connect everyone who has the same interest on all over the globe together. As a result, participants can take pleasure from these kind of social activities and have more intriguing and memorable experiences with their new friends.
In short, although, some gernes of fashion could be too high-priced for some people, there are also a greal deal of other styles which is also on trend with a more resonable price for those with limited budget. Thus , it should be regarded as a fundamental parts of our daily lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in short, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97714285714 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78545884761 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631428571429 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1033653804 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.166666667 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196694191447 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656936217605 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361828031544 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119212335712 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242896326933 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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