Sports help to a greater extent to build peace in world. Do you agree or disagree? Give some examples and include relevant experiences in your response.
Sports are one way for people to momentarily remove their daily problems and tensions. In my opinion, I partly agree with this point of view. Similarly, international sports events bring human life's physical and spiritual advantages. On the other hand, I believe that sports events lead to an increase in criminals.
First of all, sport helps considerably with societal harmony in a variety of ways. People in a country that organizes sporting events, in particular, will strive to forget about life's pressures and sorrows in order to enjoy sporting activities with pleasure and enthusiasm. As a consequence, their lives will be filled with happiness and peace in a short time as they become more friendly and sociable. For example, in 2011, the global cricket tournament was held in Bangladesh. It brought considerable excitement to the people, despite the numerous issues around them and their country. Above all, sporting activities create international togetherness, thus enhancing global peace and cooperation. Furthermore, it reduces the degree of political tension between countries.
On the other hand, one of the negative consequences of sport is an increase in the number of crimes. When a particular sports event takes place in the world, some people will take advantage of it in order to earn more money unlawfully. For example, when sports events such as the Euro, World Cup, Olympics, and so on occur, some people will create many sports betting games online and offline, and the losers have a negative proclivity to become criminals in order to have money to continue participating or repaying debts. As a result, the number of offenses in society will rise.
In conclusion, sports bring enjoyment to everyone, but they also create opportunities for bad people to profiteer. Countries should support the development of community-building sporting events and establish strict crime-prevention policies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, similarly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41860465116 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04550246494 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2421869574 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.9375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4375 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134649711362 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414050542778 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298324109886 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814869663238 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107121304131 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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