You have recently noticed a lot of rubbish in the area where you live. You decided to complain about this.
Write a letter to the environmental officer. In your letter
• describe where the rubbish is coming from
• say what problems it is causing
• suggest what the environmental officer could do
Dear Sir/madam,
I am write this letter because of too much rubbish collection near my house. The city cleaner noting coming to collect all garbage since 2 months now.
I am live in Kingston area on Raymond street. All people here in Kingston area throw rubbish in front of house in the green, blue and black box. But the box is too much full and all people keep outside the box and looking very dirty.
Many street have more rubbish outside and not in the box so it is too much smelly and all street looking very dirty because animal tear the plastic.
I am request you to please keep big bin for every street so all people can go and throw extra rubbish bag over there. It make street looking little bit clean. I also asking you to please check if the people in church can come to help us for few hours in weekend to clean the street as it is difficult for resident to do all the work.
Please help us to clear this problems and keep place clean.
Thank you very much.
Yours faithfully,
Chamkaur Singh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/madam, I am write this letter because of too mu...
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Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'written'.
Suggestion: written
Dear Sir/madam, I am write this letter because of too much rubbish...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
... throw extra rubbish bag over there. It make street looking little bit clean. I also...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... bag over there. It make street looking little bit clean. I also asking you to please chec...
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Line 6, column 25, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... all the work. Please help us to clear this problems and keep place clean. Thank ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35263157895 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98727949177 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0638435999 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9166666667 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149223475515 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594459172042 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402483142387 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825374685033 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308591787358 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.04 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.