Many children are encourage by their parents to take part time job in their free time.discuss advantages and disadvantage of it.
Dispite the disadvantages of working part time job by students, their parents force them for it, however, I feel othewise and I will discuss in my forthcoming paragraphs.
there are some merits of doing part time work by students, meanwhile the most prominent is they learn money management skill. To elaborate it, today's generation have no idea that how to save their money but if they do work in any office then they will learnt about the value of money,which is not only benefit for their present life but also it will good for their future.As a result, by doing so, they become a good money managed person. however, there are upteen demerits of this first and foremost is they do not concentrate in their study.To explain it, if they will spent their time in job then they would lack behind in their studies.they also show their less interest in physical and leisure activities as well. they do job their small age they will depressed they feel burden of their work on them and they do not concentrate their studies. Which have very bad effects on them .to indicate a recent research revealed that approximately three quarters of workers , who are student are depressed due to burden of their work. Thus ,it has too many bad effects. In conclusion, although it has advantage,we cannot neglect it's disadvantages. So,it's demerits really outweigh on its merits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: part-time
Dispite the disadvantages of working part time job by students, their parents force th...
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Suggestion: part-time
... there are some merits of doing part time work by students, meanwhile the most p...
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... are some merits of doing part time work by students, meanwhile the most prominen...
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Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...ey do work in any office then they will learnt about the value of money,which is not o...
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Suggestion: , which
...hey will learnt about the value of money,which is not only benefit for their present l...
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Suggestion: As
... but also it will good for their future.As a result, by doing so, they become a g...
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... will good for their future.As a result, by doing so, they become a good money ma...
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...hey become a good money managed person. however, there are upteen demerits of th...
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: To
... they do not concentrate in their study.To explain it, if they will spent their ti...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...their study.To explain it, if they will spent their time in job then they would lack ...
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Suggestion: They
...hysical and leisure activities as well. they do job their small age they will depres...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'depress'
Suggestion: depress
.... they do job their small age they will depressed they feel burden of their work on them...
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Suggestion:
... small age they will depressed they feel burden of their work on them and they do...
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Suggestion: .
...ies. Which have very bad effects on them .to indicate a recent research revealed t...
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Suggestion: ,
... approximately three quarters of workers , who are student are depressed due to b...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...proximately three quarters of workers , who are student are depressed due to burden of...
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...s , who are student are depressed due to burden of their work. Thus ,it has too m...
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Suggestion: ,
...essed due to burden of their work. Thus ,it has too many bad effects. ...
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Suggestion:
...ork. Thus ,it has too many bad effects. In conclusion, although it has advantage...
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Suggestion: , we
...In conclusion, although it has advantage,we cannot neglect its disadvantages. So,it...
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Suggestion: , its
...,we cannot neglect its disadvantages. So,its demerits really outweigh on its merits....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, then, thus, well, while, as to, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82478632479 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59966916445 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594017094017 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.3825225746 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.444444444 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243463441144 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105460310143 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942304111303 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248598756264 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580781949099 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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