The bar chart shows the number of heat related illnesses suffered by high school students per 100000 sports events in Central US State The line graph shows the average temperarures for one year in a US State

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The bar chart shows the number of heat-related illnesses suffered by high school students per 100000 sports events in Central US State. The line graph shows the average temperarures for one year in a US State.

The first graph illustrates how many heat-stress diseases affected high school students in each 100.000 sports event, the second one demonstrates the average temperatures in Fahrenheit, all the figures are measured month-to-month in central US states.

Overall, in central US states, the highest number of heat-related illnesses is recorded in August. Moreover, the month before August shows the greatest average temperatures.

Look at the time from August to December, the figure for illness hits the peak at nearly 70, which is much higher than the second one, almost seven times. In addition, in the winter months, the number of heat-related illnesses drops steadily from 8 to 1.

In terms of the rest months, in July, there are correlates with a similar peak in temperature, which reached approximately 92 degrees at its highest and 69 degrees at its lowest. And, at the time coolest of the year, the quantity of incidences is just about 6 while February and May witness the number 0 each in this figure.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, may, moreover, second, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14457831325 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87217392831 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7230762296 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246952010235 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111375387119 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817599931374 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147877446024 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863071975831 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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