The graphs below show radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make cmparisions where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of Americans using radio and television throughout the day in 1992.
It is clear from the graph that the highest percentage of audiences using radio is around 9 am and the highest proportion of people using television is around 8 pm.
Within 6 a.m and 9 a.m, the number of audiences using radio increased significantly from 5 percent to 30 percent. Compared with that, the period within 10 a.m and 3 pm witnessed a rapid drop in the percentage of people using radio from 30 percent to 10 percent. Next, between 4 pm to 6 am, there was a period of slight volatility from 15 percent to 5 percent
Compared with radio audiences, the number of television users seems to be larger. From 6 am to 4 pm, the percentage of people using television fluctuated quickly from 0 percent to 15 percent. Within 4 pm to 8 pm, the number of television audiences continued to rise suddenly from 15 percent to almost 50 percent. However, the time within 8 pm and 6 am witnessed a dramatic fall from 50 percent to 5 percent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion is around 8 pm. Within 6 a.m and 9 a.m, the number of audiences using radio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83143440681 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 127.690721649 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417989417989 0.622605031667 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.4558320033 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107367136654 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753888210404 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785720849212 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117221530067 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090402607721 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.