You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much.
Write a letter to the restaurant to
• Thank them.
• Mention the food, service and the atmosphere.
• Suggest any improvements to make things better.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to you about the exquisite experience that my friends and I had at your restaurant named "British Mentor". I really wanted to thank you personally for your management and hope to revisit your restaurant many more times in the future.
The first thing which enchanted me was the ambiance in your restaurant. Not only was there a fresh smell of exotic fragrant but also the decoration was spell-binding. I felt as if I had traveled to Paris and was eating at one of the best fine dining restaurants. Next, the waiters were very professional in their approach and gave me sufficient details on the different parts of the menu as well as providing me insights on the way in which the food would taste. Finally, once the food arrived and we tasted it, there was a blast of flavour in our mouths and our taste buds were left wondering how such a delicious meal could have been made within such a short time.
However, there are a couple of amenities which I would like to see in the future. Starting with the table, there should be tissues at all the tables and also fresh water for everyone to relax once they arrive. Secondly the washroom should be cleaned after every hour since our guests felt it was extremely unhygienic. Lastly, the air conditioning could have been well-maintained as there was a mechanical noise coming out of it.
Overall, I still felt ecstatic over the experience which my friends had while celebrating a birthday party. I hope to visit your establishment soon on another joyous occasion.
With Regards
Tahmeed Rahman
01799581996
tahmeed93rahman@gmail.com
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in which the food would taste. Finally, once the food arrived and we tasted it, ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 937.175257732 145% => OK
No of words: 277.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90613718412 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0047944416 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620938628159 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 290.88556701 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1404963019 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0714285714 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208643844815 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619892306537 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612380938334 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102102803336 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097610979859 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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