Everyone wants to be as healthy as possible. Fortunately, in modern society there are many things that people can do to improve their physical condition. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
• Get exercise on a regular basis
• Eat healthy food every day
• Visit a doctor for regular examinations
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Having longer life should be attribute to the increase attention for human on their heath. There are different aspects that people thinks it matters most. Some might think getting exercise on a regular basis or visiting a doctor for regular examinations are more important for our health, while others consider it's better to having nutritious food to stay healthy. From my point of view, I support the latter.
To begin with, eating healthy food can prevent us from having chances of getting exposed to unhealthy or toxic chemical. There are lots of fast food with substances that harm our body. If we usually take these food as our meal, it may damage our health swiftly and getting disease more likely. However, by replacing unhealthy food with healthy meal, we don't have to worry about our body because we directly avoid those harmful substance. For example, there are lot of news about people having hamburgers every day and getting cancer in the end in such a young age. Nevertheless, if people choose to have healthy meal such as salad or eating stewed food instead of fried food, it can directly avoid those unhealthy chemical, which is a more straightforward method to stay healthy. Hence, eating healthy food might be most efficient way considering having a healthy life.
Last but not least, consuming food that is beneficial to our body can strengthen our immune system. As we know, having enough nutrition and taking healthy substances can help our body become stronger and be able to prevent from the attack from variety of diseases. For example, children living in Africa died much more easily than any other children in the world. Being lack of enough healthy food is the most significant factor. If there's no enough nutrition, it's hard for body to build a firm immune system to prevent from the attack from bacteria or virus. This results to a bad health condition and dying early in the end. Hence, having a healthy diet is a more fundamental and necessary way for pursuing healthy life.
Irrefutably, some might asserts that getting exercise on a regular basis or visiting a doctor for regular examinations are more important in keeping our health. They think that exercise regularly can keep our body stronger from virus or bacteria and visiting a doctor can help us examine the detrimental disease such as cancer as soon as possible to prevent from death. However, what they neglect is that having healthy food is more rudimentary. If we don't get enough nutrition, we are not obliged to discussing how other things can be done to further fortify our health. Also, eating healthy food is an active way to protect our health, while visiting a doctor or exercising are more passive methods. They are more like a compensation to our body for taking unhealthy food. Hence, to stay healthy, having healthy food might be the best solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'attributed'?
Suggestion: attributed
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Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2373.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 485.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89278350515 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48067887266 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465979381443 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3408745166 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.92 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273964348198 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946822754968 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069987233914 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184197941081 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457499945471 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.