The chart below shows the percentage of Australian people who were born in different places of the world

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The chart below shows the percentage of Australian people who were born in different places of the world.

The line graph gives information about the proportion of Australian people born in various regions in the world from 1976 to 2011. Overall, the total figure for Australian people underwent a slight decrease between 1976 and 2001 and climb sharply for the following 10 years. Whereas there was a toward trend in the percentage of Australian residents born in Asia and other regions, figure for that in the UK saw a decline.
To be more specific, in 1976, the percentage of Australian people who were born in the UK ranked first at nearly 15 while the figures for that in Asia and other places were 11% and 3% respectively. From 1976 to 1986, the proportion of Australians born in Asia increased significantly and the figures for that in other regions hit a record low of 7%.
From this time onwards, the figure of the UK tended to drop remarkably to 5% in 2011. On the other hand, the percentage of Australian people born in Asia and other places surpassed that in the UK between 1991 to 2001 before having opposite trend patterns in 2006. By 2001, the figure for Asia rose to 15%, compared to 13% of other regions.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62311557789 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55986627198 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48743718593 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.921194419 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241432374948 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116166007629 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942610844647 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184172750526 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545017957785 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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