TPO20,Q5

21 in 30

1. you talked over 60 seconds. in 68 seconds.

2. grammar error: more better

3. look at the pattern, you put too much time on the part 2, then you don't have time on part 3:

Try this pattern for Q5:

part 1. Briefly summarize the problem the speakers are discussing. //about 15 seconds.

part 2. Then state which of the two solutions from the conversation you would recommend. //about 15 seconds. Like: there are possibly two solutions: The first one is: blabla....the second one is: blabla...If I were the woman/man, I would choose the first/second solution.

part 3. Explain the reason for your recommendation. //(suppose the recommendation is the first solution). Even though the second solution has some advantages like: blabla(about 10 seconds), still I choose the first solution . because reason 1, blabla(about 10 seconds)...reason 2, blabla(about 10 seconds)...

suggestions:
Listen to this speaking again and try to remove those duplicated or unnecessary words, phrases and sentences.