tell about your day
Hello my name is minh tam i will tell you my day.In the morning I get up early and I have breakfast with my parents.I think we should have breakfast after getting up is better for our metabolism.This meal is the most important beacause it sustains us for the whole day.Then my dad drop me off at school and I at the back entrain i have to go on foot.I study on fourth floor so I have to wake up the stairs because in my school they don’t have elevator for student.I think it is so inconvinient for entire students in the school.I stidy at 6:45 until 9:30am i leave school and my dad drive me come back home.I was really supprised because my brother he was positive of covid 19.This really hit homr for my family but everyone try to keep calm and they decided to put me and my mom into relatives’s house and for now I am living here with my mom.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Hello my name is minh tam i will tell you my day.In the morning I g...
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...name is minh tam i will tell you my day.In the morning I get up early and I have b...
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...ly and I have breakfast with my parents.I think we should have breakfast after ge...
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...getting up is better for our metabolism.This meal is the most important beacause it ...
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...acause it sustains us for the whole day.Then my dad drop me off at school and I at t...
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...t the back entrain i have to go on foot.I study on fourth floor so I have to wake...
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...ol they don’t have elevator for student.I think it is so inconvinient for entire ...
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...nient for entire students in the school.I stidy at 6:45 until 9:30am i leave scho...
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...nient for entire students in the school.I stidy at 6:45 until 9:30am i leave scho...
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...the school.I stidy at 6:45 until 9:30am i leave school and my dad drive me come b...
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...hool and my dad drive me come back home.I was really supprised because my brother...
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...hool and my dad drive me come back home.I was really supprised because my brother...
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... my brother he was positive of covid 19.This really hit homr for my family but every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 5.60731707317 660% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14545454545 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42275712074 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624242424242 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 165.0 22.4926829268 734% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 684.0 112.824112599 606% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 165.0 22.9334400587 719% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.0 5.23603664747 573% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0482758730351 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482758730351 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0482758730351 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 80.6 13.2329268293 609% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -70.62 61.2550243902 -115% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 64.1 10.3012195122 622% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 7.97 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.83 8.06136585366 172% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.4329268293 472% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 68.0 10.9970731707 618% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 11.0658536585 488% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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