In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive.
Communication technology has turned this whole world into a global village. Presently, people worldwide have tendency to be facilitated by the communication technology for official dealings and promote the global friendships by using various social sites. It is argued that this phenomenon has more demerits than merits. But, I would like to assert it has more pros than cons.
There are manifold advantages of this happening. First and foremost, the business networks are spreading their roots worldwide due to the communication technology. For instance, it has been possible for the enterprises ...
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people worldwide have tendency to be facilitated by the communication technology for official dealings and promote the global friendships by using various social sites
people worldwide have a tendency to be facilitated by the communication technology for official dealings and promoting the global friendships by using various social sites
to develop better understanding by disappearing cultural gaps
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