The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates different difficulties faced by pupils in two different primary educational centers in 2005 and 2007.
On the first hand; In 2005, students of school A and school B has problems with a total of seven various subjects which includes reading, writing, spelling, listening, etc. When compared to School B students, kids of school A have more issues.
Reading ability, handwriting, spelling have the least issues with 22, 28, and 30 students, after that comes listening skills and verbal expression of ideas with 35 students each. lastly, students with difficulty in concentration in lessons and following instructions are 40 and 42 respectivley. Whereas, school B students has fewer difficulties; number of students for difficulties in reading,handwriting,spelling and following instructions are below 10. At the same time, listening skills, verbal expression of ideas and concentration are under 15.
On the other hand; In 2015, subjects which disturbed the most to kids are reading,handwriting,spelling with numbers below 30. At the same time other remaning areas were little moderate for students as compared to later with numbers below 21. For school B, reading and handwriting issues were below 10 and rest of the particular fields, students were below 15.
It can be concluded that, In both 2005 and 2015 school B students has least issues as compared to school A.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...ression of ideas with 35 students each. lastly, students with difficulty in concentrat...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 392, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , handwriting
... of students for difficulties in reading,handwriting,spelling and following instructions are...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , handwriting
...h disturbed the most to kids are reading,handwriting,spelling with numbers below 30. At the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 67, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the least'.
Suggestion: has the least
...In both 2005 and 2015 school B students has least issues as compared to school A.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41095890411 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58352952662 2.65546596893 135% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543378995434 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2642694694 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.727272727 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132587741379 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058552419065 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483977125859 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962792406289 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443063424299 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...ression of ideas with 35 students each. lastly, students with difficulty in concentrat...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 392, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , handwriting
... of students for difficulties in reading,handwriting,spelling and following instructions are...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , handwriting
...h disturbed the most to kids are reading,handwriting,spelling with numbers below 30. At the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 67, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the least'.
Suggestion: has the least
...In both 2005 and 2015 school B students has least issues as compared to school A.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41095890411 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58352952662 2.65546596893 135% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543378995434 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2642694694 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.727272727 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132587741379 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058552419065 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483977125859 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962792406289 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443063424299 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.