City living in the 21st century is stressful and offers no advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Every era has its mesmerizing interests as well as hardships. Similarly, the modern age offers several opportunities yet so many frustrations, especially life in big metropolises. This essay attempts to outline some comforts and distressfulness when living in the meantime on my own grounds.
On the one hand, the conveniences and broad work market have attracted a myriad of people to settle down in the big city. For this reason, the living area is stiffened gradually because of the mass population, thereby leading to an upsurge in accommodation and other living fees. As a result, citizens are forced to work and save in order to pay for such expenses to survive. Another concern is the change in the social-economic structure, such as the appearance of automatic machines, has narrowed down the work opportunities for the majority of the common workforce. According to experts, only more educated workers are expected to find a well-paid job while the rest is marginalized. Therefore, the increase in fees and competitiveness in the work market has drawn a doomed prospect of city life.
However, when considering other factors and the facilities provided, cosmopolitan life is not so worrying as it cracked up to be. Even if it is competitive to get a good job, urban places provide better work options because they draw more attention from inventors due to the completion of transportation systems and infrastructures, leading to a wider choice of fields and fascinating opportunities, especially for young people. For example, technological cooperations such as Facebook or Amazon lay their offices in big metropolises such as Hong Kong and Shanghai, which are popular for their populations and expensive living costs. On this account, living in a city stands a higher chance of having a good career prospect and flourishing one's ability.
In conclusion, although living in cities may lead to many depression because of the high demands, it offers many opportunities to nourish and develop the ability as well as a bright career path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun depression seems to be countable; consider using: 'many depressions'.
Suggestion: many depressions
..., although living in cities may lead to many depression because of the high demands, it offers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22121212121 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20970320653 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6444503232 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.071428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941243171015 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322147026875 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386839634912 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630986714548 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134764045106 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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