Nowadays, road traffic and environmental pollution are significant issues and authorities are going to implement various options to control those by increasing the cost of petrol.
Evidently, most of the individuals have moved to private vehicles and usage of cars and motorcycles are recently increased with population. That become a huge reason for traffic and air pollution since most people are use their own transports specially when peak times to report to the workplace. As example, in Singapore, offices start time is around 0800 to 0900 so all office workers have to travel at same time to report to the work. If they use cars instead of public transport, definitely it can be the reasoned for traffic and fuel will be the reasoned for air pollution.
However, there are various solutions can apply for those issues. Such as new tax policies, increase the price of car permits, import electric vehicles and upgrade the quality of public transport services. As the first example, introduce a new tax scheme for private transportation. It helps to demotivate people to buy new cars or motorcycles. The second example is, identify the issues and increase the facilities of public transport and apply a reasonable ticket price. The main reason to reject the public services is, it is stopped at every bus stations and may be late to report to the workplace. Government can arrange special bus service at work times and office workers should be the target passengers.
In conclusion, my point of view, in order to control the traffic and minimize the air pollution, apply a high rate of cost to the petrol is a one success method while improving the public transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04301075269 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81190505456 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4116393099 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0872125881803 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316445834013 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278449535768 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609351167244 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021497362397 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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