The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purpose.
Given are two figures illustrating the process of cement production from limestone and clay, as well as the production of concrete from cement for the aim of using in constructions. This industry is one of the most profitable industries all around the world, especially in developing countries.
First, limestone and clay are combined and crushed in order to make powder. Afterwards, once the powder is mixed, it is heated through the rotating heater to create a combination which is then grinned to become the cement. Finally, the cement is packed in bags to transfer to the construction sites.
It is evident from the information provided by the concrete production that concrete is the outcome of the combination of ingredients such as cement(15%), water (10%), sand (25%) and gravel or small stones for about the half proportion. These materials are mixed in the concrete mixer to have the outcome of concrete at the end of the process.
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Given are two figures illustrating the process of cement production from limestone and clay, as well as the production of concrete from cement for the aim of using in constructions. overall, the cement production includes four stages. While the production of concrete has one process which is combination.
in the first stage of producing cement, limestone and clay are crushed together in order to create a powder. sequentially, once this powder is mixed, it is heated through a rotating heater to make a mixture which is then grinned to form cement. finally, cement is packed in bags to transfer to the market.
It is evident from the information provided from the second diagram that concrete is the combination of ingredients such as cement, water, sand and gravel. the most important material is gravel or small stones which form the 50% of concrete. The other materials form the other half of it by the percentages of 15, 10 and 25 for cement, water and sand respectively. The ingredients are combined together in concrete mixer to create the concrete for the purpose of using in constructing buildings.
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