I feel the term " Free " is a myth when it comes to real life and today's world. So ,In my view the mentioned statement that best things in life do not cost money is not at all true . Everything in this world has its own cost,either monetary or in other ways. we human beings give highest value to love, happiness and peace. We have to pay something or other to get these things in our life.
First of all lets discuss about " Love ". People must be thinking that there is no cost to get love.But, i don't agree with it. According to me, Love has its own cost directly and indirectly. If you wan...
i was not good in essay in my
i was not good in essay in my school but trying to improve ... please suggest me some ways so that i can get 28/29 marks..thanks
1. You need to know more
1. You need to know more different Words. Look:
No. of Words: 551 while No. of Different Words: 221
the ideal condition:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
2. More sentences varieties wanted. Try to use less pronouns or not to use pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
and time need to be spend from
and time need to be spent from
Sentence: Spending qualitative time is also a very crucial factor to get love.In today's date Time is money.In most cases you have spend money to spend time with your love .
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and spend
flaws:
No. of Words: 551 350 //Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 31 15
No. of Words: 551 350
No. of Characters: 2241 1500
No. of Different Words: 221 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.845 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.067 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.965 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 105 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.774 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.658 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.581 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.284 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.445 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.126 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5