You want to send a gift/present to you friend who has moved recently to a new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Describe the gift
- Why you chose the gift
- Explain on how you plan to deliver the gift.
Dear Raj,
Hi! Hope you and family are in good health and happy about moving to your new house. Last week.
I got you a very nice present and I am thinking you will like it a lot. I know you like coffee and I got you a Mat chef coffee maker from Walmart. It is blue in colour and can make ten cup of coffee in one time. It is not very big it is like 13 inches in height and has anti drip option.
I checked many things and then I decided on this as you spend too much money on coffee every morning. Now, you can make it at home and save some dollars.
I will bring with me when I am coming to help you to set up the house in this weekend. I also keep the receipt safe so we can test it and if you are not happy we can change the gift at Walmart.
See you soon on Saturday!
Yours loving,
Guru
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Raj, Hi! Hope you and family are in good heal...
^^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: blue
... chef coffee maker from Walmart. It is blue in colour and can make ten cup of coffee in one t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'cup' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'cups'.
Suggestion: cups
... It is blue in colour and can make ten cup of coffee in one time. It is not very b...
^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...See you soon on Saturday! Yours loving, Guru
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 634.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.75147928994 4.54256449028 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.73050369682 2.54303337028 68% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621301775148 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5364243669 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.4 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289676607593 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100336454836 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706738341828 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152347223696 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108880739162 0.0580467560999 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 4.17 8.71597938144 48% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.83 7.59969072165 77% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 41.2886597938 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Raj, Hi! Hope you and family are in good heal...
^^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: blue
... chef coffee maker from Walmart. It is blue in colour and can make ten cup of coffee in one t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'cup' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'cups'.
Suggestion: cups
... It is blue in colour and can make ten cup of coffee in one time. It is not very b...
^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...See you soon on Saturday! Yours loving, Guru
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 634.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.75147928994 4.54256449028 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.73050369682 2.54303337028 68% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621301775148 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5364243669 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.4 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289676607593 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100336454836 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706738341828 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152347223696 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108880739162 0.0580467560999 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 4.17 8.71597938144 48% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.83 7.59969072165 77% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 41.2886597938 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.