You want to send a gift/present to you friend who has moved recently to a new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Describe the gift
- Why you chose the gift
- Explain on how you plan to deliver the gift.
Dear Soniy,
Hi! Congrats for the move to a new home in New Jersy. I am writing to inform about the present I picked up and I am sure you will like it.
I got you a very old manual wall clock. It has a good black wood finishing with colourful peacock on the top. It has only four numbers in golden color.
I was looking for this kind of clock and I found this one in a local gift shop here. I am glad I found this one as it is like the one you liked in the museum last year and wanted one.
I am driving from North Carolina to New York and will come when I am returning. I will stay for a night and will bring the present with me. Make some of your special food, lets enjoy.
See you all soon, till then bye.
Yours loving,
Rajji
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Soniy, Hi! Congrats for the move to a new home ...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the museum last year and wanted one. I am driving from North Carolina to New ...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... one. I am driving from North Carolina to New York and will come when I am retu...
^^
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...York and will come when I am returning. I will stay for a night and will bring th...
^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... all soon, till then bye. Yours loving, Rajji
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 588.0 937.175257732 63% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.86842105263 4.54256449028 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.83438230714 2.54303337028 72% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 180.0 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3135332658 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.0 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199146220199 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623564078148 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412990765601 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955226151908 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392609363103 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.1 8.37731958763 37% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.28 8.71597938144 49% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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