The above diagram chart illustrates the stages in the maintaining and harvesting of a forest trees. It represents about the life cycle of trees in the forest area, how they can be useful after harvesting.
To begin, there are many stages before harvesting and processing of forest trees. Firstly, the saplings are grown under the laboratory condition or in the indoor environment. Before sapling, the land should be prepared for the plant growth, by using a tractor machine the entire land will be ploughed, which is used for the planting. Further, the saplings are planted by digging into the soil up to some extent. Next, the process pruning should be done in trees grown to some height.
In the next stage, uprooting of trees are used for the various purposes; like thinning, transportation, and onsite processing. In the thinning process, logs are used as by-products for firewood and posts. Other than that, transportation of heavy logs into the pulp mills and the saw mills. In the pulp mill, paper is extracted from the pulp. Apart from that, on sawmill it undergo kiln drying and modified in to planks. At last, in the onsite processing bulk logs are transported by the wagons
Overall, the life cycle of forest trees started from the saplings and ended with various usages like firewood, posts, papers, and planks.
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Yes, getting rid of trees is…
Yes, getting rid of trees is always sad, because on the one hand it’s cool when there are a lot of trees, but sometimes they can really get in the way. I believe that when removing trees, it is necessary to use the most gentle methods, for example, in this article you can read about the roundup tool, which is the most popular in the world and it will quickly help you solve the problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'undergoes'?
Suggestion: undergoes
...he pulp. Apart from that, on sawmill it undergo kiln drying and modified in to planks. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95964125561 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58809280671 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569506726457 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2355048945 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0769230769 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0623971828665 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262572347318 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439616092907 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470092259372 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038797422843 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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