Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world with the galloping rate of development in science and technology, modern cars are produced in every country. Some scholars believe the production of new cars will be decreased in the future, due to reaching to the postmodern technologies. They point out like the invention of the airplane, new cars will be introduced which can fly. There will be not any traffic and so much money can be saved because of the sky road. On the contrary, other professional researchers state that not only the number of cars will not be reduced, but also would be increased. I, personally, approach to the latter idea. Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
To begin with, nowadays people accustom to use cars in ordinary life. Also, they will need cars more and more in the future. It can be mentioned that cars are ubiquitous over the world even in the poor countries. It is indisputably axiomatic that using cars can produce several jobs like repairing, washing, importing and exporting, and working as a sport. Therefore, it would be very difficult to reduce the number of cars in the future.
Another rationale to endorse my point of view is about companies. According to the statistics, more than 40 famous car companies produce millions of cars annually. Without any shadow of doubt, money is the crucial aim of every company. Therefore, when they gain a lot of money by selling cars, they will not reduce their production in the future. The proponent of this notion put emphasis on the fact that some prosperous countries affect the economy of whole the world. These countries never permit others to reduce the number of cars in the future.
Last but not least, in today's hectic life most people get influenced by advertisements. Moreover, a great budget is invested in the commercial industry. Consequently, people eager to buy car by seeing advertisements or video games. For instance, recent studies show the number of the car athletes have been increased dramatically due to the advertisements.
In summary, with all this taken into account I believe due to the style of living, profit of big companies, and advertisements the number of cars will be increased in the future. Nevertheless, no one can predict the future of human beings.
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not only the number of cars will not be reduced, but also would be increased.
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