Write a paragraph of about 180-220 words about the benefits and drawbacks of advertising.
I hold a firm belief that the benefits of advertising outweigh its drawbacks. On the one hand, advertising plays an indispensable role in our life. First and foremost, on the grounds that advertising provides a great deal of information, customers will be able to gain an insight into the products. To be more specific, they acquire the information about the products’ uses, functions, expiry date and promotions. Consequently, people can choose their favourite items that suit their pockets and demand. Furthermore, broadcasters will have opportunities to make a huge profit from advertising. Advertisments are usually published in the prime hours or intervals, so as to not only catch viewers’ attention but also make money for the government. On the other hand, advertising has some detrimental influences on people’s satisfaction and spending value of the products. One disadvantage is that advertising interrupt viewers’ emotions. To be more precise, while watching their favourite television programmes, watchers detest being distracted by sudden advertisments. Therfore, it creates annoyance which negatively affects products’ sales. Moreover, advertising may cause a waste of money. An explanation for this is that many commercials consist of celebrity endorsement in order to increase attractiveness. As a result, no matter how quality the products are, people can be easily swayed by the enticement of celebrity-collaborated advertising, leading to the fact that what they bought may not live up to their expectations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 664, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...lished in the prime hours or intervals, so as to not only catch viewers’ attention but a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, as to, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69130434783 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53312437708 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686956521739 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4091239351 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103481440113 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360493510684 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367150218491 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103481440113 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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