I don't agree with that selfish opinion that human needs are superior to protecting endangered animals.
The life on Earth forms a very complicated and entangled community called ecosystem. In such system each element, which can be any denizen of Earth, exert some influence on other species and simultaneously is influenced by them. For example, bees fly from one flower to another and feed from their nectar while unintentionally transfer the pollens between different flowers, which helps them to reproduce effectively. Those flowered plants may be eaten by livestock and in the same way the liv...
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Sentence: Therefore, mankind should respects the nature and restrict the exploitation of Natural resources in favor of other habitats of earth.
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