Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People learn things better from those at their own level - such as fellow students or co-workers - than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teaching is of utmost importance in this modernized world. Learning things the right way matters a lot than learning them for the sake of doing it. Moreover, more emphasis is to be placed on learning a thing perfectly and gaining the maximum possible benefits. It is possible only when people learn from the erudite and the experienced. Hence, I summarily disagree with the statement that, people learn things better from those at their own level, than from those at a higher level.
First of all, there is a specific format of learning anything. For instance, if on...
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it can't b written in 30
it can't b written in 30 mins...so does not deserve 28 marks
flaws:
No. of Words: 616 350
Try not use 'thus','hence' a lot.
It is on top list:
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 28 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 32 15
No. of Words: 616 350
No. of Characters: 3007 1500
No. of Different Words: 283 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.982 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.881 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.637 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 224 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 162 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 125 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 64 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.608 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.594 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.268 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.458 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.1 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5