It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be.
Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together.
Include any relevant examples from your experience.
Nowadays, it is an undeniable fact that family ties are going to be faded compared to our ancestors' family relations and it may cause so many social and family concerns. Moving ahead, we will notice the whys and the wherefores of this phenomenon and the ways of confronting with.
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Comments
Hi, Thank you for your
Hi,
Thank you for your consideration.
Would you please tell me what is the exact problem of "not only.....but also".
Unfortunately I did not get the point.
Thank you again.
B.Pajang
You mean this? Not only can
You mean this?
Not only can we keep our privacy,but also we may keep our family members company in any occasions.
not only we can keep our privacy but also we may keep our family members company in any occasions.
Description: 'Not only...but also' is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 369 350
No. of Characters: 1775 1500
No. of Different Words: 210 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.383 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.81 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.348 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.356 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.302 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.477 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.103 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5