In the contemporary days, museums and art galleries seem to be less popular when some people state that these facilities are not necessary anymore, as the development of technology nowadays allows them to access art works and historical objects easier by computer. For me, I totally disagree with this point of view.
There are several reasons to claim that. Initially, the feelings will absolutely be different when we turn up to enjoy a piece of artwork at the galleries and museums compared to searching for it on the Internet. By watching directly, we seek for and stop by the truly splendid masterpieces that fit our style or make us reckon some precious values in the middle of various other patterns. Therefore, it helps us form a potential in art absorption and comparison, whilst it could be harder for us to really see the entire message just through online looking.
Secondly, erecting those kinds of facilities is a good way to acknowledge enormous efforts of artists who invented the art works as well as reserve them for a permanent duration. This is proven by historical weapons or artefacts normally viewed at war or architectural museums have still been preserved nicely over generations, for instance, so that young people like us at present can have an honor to witness objects from many years ago by our own sight and be likely to connect to the old ages. Most of us might appear at exhibitions at least once in our lives, we also gradually sympathize with the meaning the artworks bring to us. In some cases, those feelings can be transmitted into the power of determination and inspire us a lot to be in love and appreciate all achievements over past time.
In conclusion, I insist that museums and art galleries are irreplaceable destinations for those who have interest in art and should be invested more so as the values can be spread to many others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 790, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ve and appreciate all achievements over past time. In conclusion, I insist that museums ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, at least, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8173374613 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79756611635 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600619195046 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0371809877 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.454545455 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3636363636 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213425131844 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785420903434 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701560651266 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152230398523 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655790852376 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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