MURAH WA 0813 2744 6997 Perhitungan Cut And Fill Bojong Tegal 52465 WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Batu Gragal Dukuhwaru Tegal 52451 WA 0813 2744 6997 Cara Menghitung Borongan Galian Tanah Bumijawa Tegal 52466 WA 0813 2744 6997 Pembersihan Lokasi Pagerbarang Teg

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MURAH! WA 0813 2744 6997 Perhitungan Cut And Fill Bojong, Tegal 52465 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Batu Gragal Dukuhwaru, Tegal 52451 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Cara Menghitung Borongan Galian Tanah Bumijawa, Tegal 52466 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Pembersihan Lokasi Pagerbarang, Tegal 52462 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Jasa Urugan Tanah Kramat, Tegal 52181 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Contoh Rab Pekerjaan Land Clearing Tegal Selatan, Tegal 52137

Submitted by masjoni9 on Tue, 05/10/2022 - 23:46

MURAH! WA 0813 2744 6997 Perhitungan Cut And Fill Bojong, Tegal 52465 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Batu Gragal Dukuhwaru, Tegal 52451 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Cara Menghitung Borongan Galian Tanah Bumijawa, Tegal 52466 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Pembersihan Lokasi Pagerbarang, Tegal 52462 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Jasa Urugan Tanah Kramat, Tegal 52181 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Contoh Rab Pekerjaan Land Clearing Tegal Selatan, Tegal 52137

Jasa Pengurugan
Kami melayani jasa tanah uruk (peninggian volume tanah) perumahan, lahan, jalan, ruko dengan menggunakan bahan material tanah uruk berupa : tanah merah super, tanah boncos, tanah merah, tanah campur, makadam, sirtu dan puing limbah proyek bangunan memakai kendaraan diantaranya :
# Truk Double engkel
# Truck Engkel
# Dump Truk

Dengan pengalaman maupun kinerja jasa kami, Kami di dukung dengan tenaga kerja yang handal dan memiliki alat mesin maupun manual yang komplit dengan demikian pekerjaan tanah uruk Anda akan berjalan secara cepat, efisien, serta memuaskan Anda.

Layanan Cut And Fill
Layanan Cut and Fill yang biasa kita dengar dengan gali dan uruk merupakan pekerjaan konstruksi tahap yang pertama di sebuah proyek konstruksi, entah itu pengembangan perumahan, kontruksi sipil, saluran irigasi dan sebagainya.

Yang berbeda dengan pengerjaan urugan tanah yaitu kedua proses cut and fill dilaksanakan pada satu lokasi yang menjadi target pekerjaan. Namun sebelum proses pengerjaan harus diteliti serta diperhitungkan dahulu perihal keadaan tanah yang dijadikan sasaran.

Jasa Pengupasan Tanah
Jasa Pengupasan (pengupasan tanah lapis atas), Pengertian Stripping yaitu proses pemisahan fisik antara satu atau beberapa bagian dikeluarkan dari aliran-aliran cairan oleh aliran uap. contohnya : rumput, akar-akaran, atau bahan non organik seperti puing bangunan pondasi dan selainnya. Serta membuang hasil-hasil kupasan tersebut dari titik proyek pembangunan, saluran dan lokasi pengambilan tanah bahan timbun (borrow pit) atau lokasi yang lain menurut perintah PPK atau gambar kerja.

Jasa Pembuangan Puing
Jasa Buang Puing kami sudah berpengalaman pada sektor jasa buang puing bangunan bekas sampah proyek atau sampah bekas renovasi rumah atau sampah lainnya.

Layanan jasa buang puing sebagai berikut:
1. Bekas bongkaran dinding bata atau hebel dalam renovasi
2. Bongkaran keramik lantai atau dinding
3. Batu kali bongkaran pondasi
4. Genteng beton lama pecahan
5. Bongkaran dak beton
6. Bongkaran plafon gypsum/plafon triplek
7. Bongkaran kontruksi atap kayu
8. Bongkaran rumah lama
9. Sampah proyek
10.Sisa tanah

Jasa Galian
Dengan pengalaman kerja serta didukung dari man power yang berpengalaman dan menggunakan peralatan yang manual dan alat yang lengkap dan terbaik maka pekerjaan jasa penimbunan tanah galian yang anda inginkan bisa berjalan secara cepat, rapi dan akan memuaskan untuk anda.

Berbagai macam jasa uruk galian tanah yang dapat kami layani mulai dari volume yang kecil maupun pekerjaan galian dalam skala yang cukup besar dengan jasa urug tanah galian yaitu:

1. Galian tanah untuk saluran drainase
2. Penggalian tanah gorong gorong air
3. Jasa galian tanah untuk pondasi turap
4. Galian tanah untuk pondasi rumah/pile cap gedung
5. Galian tanah kolam renang
6. Penggalian tanah basement rumah dan gedung

Untuk tarif galian dengan manual sekitaran 150.000 per meter kubik disesuaikan dengan upah tukang galian setempat), untuk harga galian dengan memanfaatkan alat berat ada beberapa poin yang musti ditambahkan di luar dari biaya galian per meternya,tapi di kisaran 50.000/m3. Ditambah biaya mob/demob peralatan berat, koordinasi lapangan, biaya harian operator alat berat, bahan bakar/perawatan dan mess operator. jasa galian kami berpengalaman sehingga bisa bekerja secara aman, cepat, rapi namun harga termurah.

Bahan Urugan
Tanah adalah unsur dasar pada setiap konstruksi, termasuk dalam pembangunan jalan dan gedung-gedung. Kokoh atau enggaknya pondasi pun dipengaruhi oleh kondisi tanahnya. Oleh sebab itu, pada setiap proses pengerjaan tanah harus dilaksanakan dengan cermat. Diawali dari penggalian, pengurukan, dan pemadatannya.

Proyek uruk tanah terkadang memang diperlukan pada suatu proyek dengan memakai beberapa ragam pilihan material uruk tanah. Ketika pekerjaan urug tanah, tujuan akhir yang dicapai dari proyek urugan tanah kami adalah kepadatan yang maksimal dengan demikian dataran yang ada di diatasnya dapat digunakan untuk akses jalan atau mendirikan suatu bangunan.

Adapun beberapa material jasa urug tanah yang bisa kami tawarkan, yaitu sebagai berikut :

MATERIAL URUGAN TANAH (Campur Bebatuan)
MATERIAL URUGAN SIRTU
MATERIAL URUGAN CROP/MAKADAM

Harga Material Alam dan urugan
NO ITEM ARMADA HARGA Muatan
1 Brangkal Tronton Rp -Call- /m3 22-24 m3
2 Sirdam Tronton Rp -Call- /m3 22-24 m3
3 Base Course grde A Tronton Rp -Call- /m3 22-24 m3
4 Base Course grde B Tronton Rp -Call- /m3 22-24 m3
4 Abu Batu Tronton Rp -Call- /m3 22-24 m3
5 Screening Tronton Rp -Call- /m3 22-24 m3
6 Split Tronton Rp -Call- /m3 22-24 m3

Pada saat ini kami ada promo harga terjangkau untuk langganan dan pesan Jasa uruk tanah kami oleh sebab itu jangan sampai kelewatan Harga promo dari kami.

Mencari Jasa urugan Tanah Terjangkau daerah Bojong, Tegal 52465 ? Mari Order ke Kami!!!

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Untuk Informasi Lebih Lanjut Hubungi :
Bpk. Andri
Telp. WA 0813 2744 6997
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gkaran plafon gypsum/plafon triplek 7. Bongkaran kontruksi atap kayu 8. Bongkaran rumah...
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...n di luar dari biaya galian per meternya,tapi di kisaran 50.000/m3. Ditambah biaya mo...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Lahan' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nulls'.
Suggestion: Nulls
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Line 97, column 31, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Urug' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nulls'.
Suggestion: Nulls
...al 52465 WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Tanah Urug Per Pick Up Bojong, Tegal 52465 WA 081...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 24.0651302605 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 41.998997996 2% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 6069.0 1615.20841683 376% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1032.0 315.596192385 327% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88081395349 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.6678705709 4.20363070211 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93192525209 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 420.0 176.041082164 239% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406976744186 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1724.4 506.74238477 340% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 16.0721442886 230% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 299.801314632 49.4020404114 607% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.027027027 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8918918919 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.189189189189 7.06120827912 3% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 72.0 4.38176352705 1643% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 33.0 3.4128256513 967% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.565259187962 0.244688304435 231% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548154774861 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149859101123 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196755818715 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.266756065471 0.056905535591 469% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.12 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 367.0 78.4519038076 468% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itungan Cut And Fill Bojong, Tegal 52465 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Batu Gragal Duk...
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Line 12, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g biasa kita dengar dengan gali dan uruk merupakan pekerjaan konstruksi tahap yan...
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Line 17, column 6, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Pengupasan
...sasaran. Jasa Pengupasan Tanah Jasa Pengupasan pengupasan tanah lapis atas, Pengertian Stripping ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Contohnya
...i aliran-aliran cairan oleh aliran uap. contohnya : rumput, akar-akaran, atau bahan non o...
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Line 29, column 4, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gkaran plafon gypsum/plafon triplek 7. Bongkaran kontruksi atap kayu 8. Bongkaran rumah...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sisa
...gkaran rumah lama 9. Sampah proyek 10.Sisa tanah Jasa Galian Dengan pengalaman...
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Line 40, column 21, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: gorong
...k saluran drainase 2. Penggalian tanah gorong gorong air 3. Jasa galian tanah untuk pondasi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 46, column 245, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tapi
...n di luar dari biaya galian per meternya,tapi di kisaran 50.000/m3. Ditambah biaya mo...
^^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Jasa
...ahan bakar/perawatan dan mess operator. jasa galian kami berpengalaman sehingga bisa...
^^^^
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...!!! ================================= Untuk Informasi Lebih Lanjut Hubungi : ...
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Line 74, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Untuk Informasi Lebih Lanjut Hubungi : Bpk. Andri Telp. WA 0813 2744 6997 ==...
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Suggestion:
... : Bpk. Andri Telp. WA 0813 2744 6997 ================================= #Pe...
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Line 92, column 42, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Lahan' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nulls'.
Suggestion: Nulls
...A 0813 2744 6997 Harga Jasa Pembersihan Lahan Per M2 Bojong, Tegal 52465 WA 0813 274...
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Line 97, column 31, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Urug' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nulls'.
Suggestion: Nulls
...al 52465 WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Tanah Urug Per Pick Up Bojong, Tegal 52465 WA 081...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 24.0651302605 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 41.998997996 2% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 6069.0 1615.20841683 376% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1032.0 315.596192385 327% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88081395349 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.6678705709 4.20363070211 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93192525209 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 420.0 176.041082164 239% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406976744186 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1724.4 506.74238477 340% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 16.0721442886 230% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 299.801314632 49.4020404114 607% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.027027027 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8918918919 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.189189189189 7.06120827912 3% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 72.0 4.38176352705 1643% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 33.0 3.4128256513 967% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.565259187962 0.244688304435 231% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548154774861 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149859101123 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196755818715 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.266756065471 0.056905535591 469% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.12 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 367.0 78.4519038076 468% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.