TERPERCAYA WA 0813 2744 6997 Pintu Aluminium Double Sidoharjo Sragen 57281 WA 0813 2744 6997 Pintu Kaca Jendela Aluminium Sragen Sragen 57215 WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Kusen Aluminium Per Meter Di Sragen Sragen 57215 WA 0813 2744 6997 Alamat Toko Kusen Alum

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TERPERCAYA! WA 0813 2744 6997 Pintu Aluminium Double Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Pintu Kaca Jendela Aluminium Sragen, Sragen 57215 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Kusen Aluminium Per Meter Di Sragen, Sragen 57215 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Alamat Toko Kusen Aluminium Di Ngrampal, Sragen 57252 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Kusen Aluminium Pintu Rumah Plupuh, Sragen 57283 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Kusen Aluminium Coating Sragen, Sragen 57213

Submitted by masjoni9 on Wed, 05/11/2022 - 00:30

TERPERCAYA! WA 0813 2744 6997 Pintu Aluminium Double Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281 ~ #WA 0813 2744 6997 Pintu Kaca Jendela Aluminium Sragen, Sragen 57215 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Kusen Aluminium Per Meter Di Sragen, Sragen 57215 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Alamat Toko Kusen Aluminium Di Ngrampal, Sragen 57252 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Kusen Aluminium Pintu Rumah Plupuh, Sragen 57283 #WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Kusen Aluminium Coating Sragen, Sragen 57213

Jasa kontraktor alumunium dan Specialis pembuatan pekerjaan dari Kaca,Kusen alumunium seperti : partisi kaca, kusen, pintu, jendela, kaca tempered (frameless), alucopan (ACP) jalusi ventilasi, rollling door, pintu lipat (folding door), powder coating, seni sunblast, recest/ befelt, lovera, docoprofile doors untuk exterior dan interior proyek perkantoran, gedung, sekolah maupun rumah pribadi. Harga Ekonomis, Kompetetif, Artistik dan Bergaransi.

Disamping jenis pekerjaan di atas, kami pun melayani pesanan beberapa produk berikut ini:

Kusen alumunium powder coating
Kusen aluminium urat kayu (wood grain)
Kaca tempered
Kaca laminated
Kaca es
Kaca bevel motif
Pintu swing
Pintu fitting
Pintu lipat
Pintu sliding
Casement
Jendela swing
Jendela sliding
Floor hinge dorma BTS
Floor hinge dekkson
Siku bolong
Etalase kaca
Composite panel
Curtain wall

Melayani pekerjaan lainnya :
# Plafon dan partisi gypsum
# Pembuatan rangka atap Galvalum (baja ringan)
# Wood partisi (melamine) back drop, cat duco dan HPL
# Lambersherink (wooden plafon) kayu sungkai, jati dll
# Instalasi Listrik, termasuk kabel, lampu, fitting, saklar, NCB dan stop kontak
# Pemasangan wall paper dan stiker billboard
# Pemasangan alucopan, granit dan branding Billboard
# Pembuatan meubel atau furniture kayu / almari
# Renovasi rumah dan kantor dll.

Syarat pembayaran pekerjaan :
1. Harga sewaktu-waktu berubah tanpa pemberitahuan
2. Harga menyesuaikan dengan spek material yang diinginkan
3. Uang muka (DP) 50% dibayar setelah perjanjian (PO) diterima
4. Pelunasan 50% setelah pekerjaan selesai

Kami siap melayani pengerjaan interior rumah/kantor anda dengan tampilan artistik dengan tetap mengutamakan kualitas pekerjaan yang tingi. Budget minimal hasil maksimal karena didukung karyawan ahli dan berpengalaman melayani semua Wilayah kecamatan di Kota Karanganyar Jawa Tengah.

Ongkos murah dan terjangkau!
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Segera Telpon sekarang !
Informasi Katalog, Telpon dan Detail Produk Hub :
Bpk. Andri
WA 0813 2744 6997
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Pintu Aluminium Double, Pintu Kaca Jendela Aluminium, Harga Kusen Aluminium Per Meter Di, Alamat Toko Kusen Aluminium Di, Harga Kusen Aluminium Pintu Rumah, Harga Kusen Aluminium Coating

WA 0813 2744 6997 Partisi Kaca Taman Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Analisa Daun Jendela Aluminium Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Bahan Buat Kusen Aluminium Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Yg Jual Jendela Aluminium Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Ukuran Pintu Kaca Frameless Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Kusen Aluminium 4 Inch Alexindo Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Kusen Jendela Aluminium Alexindo Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Kusen Pintu Aluminium Minimalis Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Slimar Jendela Aluminium Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Ukuran Dan Harga Kusen Aluminium Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Pintu Kaca Unik Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Pintu Lipat Aluminium Bekas Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Rekomendasi Kusen Aluminium Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Cara Pasang Kusen Pintu Aluminium Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Detail Kusen Jendela Aluminium Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Jendela Aluminium Kasa Nyamuk Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Jendela Aluminium Di Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Jual Pintu Kaca Otomatis Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Tukang Kusen Aluminium Di Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Harga Kusen Aluminium Brown Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281
WA 0813 2744 6997 Pintu Aluminium Ruang Tamu Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uminium Double Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281 ~ #WA 0813 2744 6997 Pintu Kaca Jendela Al...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Kusen
... Specialis pembuatan pekerjaan dari Kaca,Kusen alumunium seperti : partisi kaca, kusen...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pesanan beberapa produk berikut ini: Kusen alumunium powder coating Kuse...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Kusen alumunium powder coating Kusen aluminium urat kayu wood grain ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Kusen aluminium urat kayu wood grain Kaca tempered Kaca laminated K...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rat kayu wood grain Kaca tempered Kaca laminated Kaca es Kaca be...
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Suggestion:
... Kaca tempered Kaca laminated Kaca es Kaca bevel motif Pintu...
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...pered Kaca laminated Kaca es Kaca bevel motif Pintu swing P...
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...ted Kaca es Kaca bevel motif Pintu swing Pintu fitting Pint...
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Suggestion:
... Kaca bevel motif Pintu swing Pintu fitting Pintu lipat Pint...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if Pintu swing Pintu fitting Pintu lipat Pintu sliding Case...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng Pintu fitting Pintu lipat Pintu sliding Casement Jendela...
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...ng Pintu lipat Pintu sliding Casement Jendela swing Jendela...
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...lipat Pintu sliding Casement Jendela swing Jendela sliding ...
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Suggestion:
...iding Casement Jendela swing Jendela sliding Floor hinge dorma B...
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Suggestion:
... Jendela swing Jendela sliding Floor hinge dorma BTS Floor hinge d...
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Suggestion:
...ela sliding Floor hinge dorma BTS Floor hinge dekkson Siku bolong ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...nge dorma BTS Floor hinge dekkson Siku bolong Etalase kaca Compo...
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Suggestion:
... Floor hinge dekkson Siku bolong Etalase kaca Composite panel C...
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Suggestion:
...son Siku bolong Etalase kaca Composite panel Curtain wall M...
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... Etalase kaca Composite panel Curtain wall Melayani pekerjaan lai...
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Line 31, column 25, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: backdrop
...um baja ringan # Wood partisi melamine back drop, cat duco dan HPL # Lambersherink wood...
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Line 52, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...duk Hub : Bpk. Andri WA 0813 2744 6997 ================================= Pi...
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Suggestion:
...6997 ================================= Pintu Aluminium Double, Pintu Kaca Jende...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 24.0651302605 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 41.998997996 0% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3686.0 1615.20841683 228% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 597.0 315.596192385 189% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.17420435511 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94303383012 4.20363070211 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89979201107 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427135678392 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1009.8 506.74238477 199% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 535.606846684 49.4020404114 1084% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.090909091 106.682146367 314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.2727272727 20.7667163134 261% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 7.06120827912 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 51.0 4.38176352705 1164% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.849780823735 0.244688304435 347% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166738112895 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.320195296925 0.0667982634062 479% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303483164273 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.330644545672 0.056905535591 581% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.8 13.0946893788 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.39 12.4159519038 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.63 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 201.0 78.4519038076 256% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 9.78957915832 644% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 63.0 10.7795591182 584% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uminium Double Sidoharjo, Sragen 57281 ~ #WA 0813 2744 6997 Pintu Kaca Jendela Al...
^^
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Kusen
... Specialis pembuatan pekerjaan dari Kaca,Kusen alumunium seperti : partisi kaca, kusen...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pesanan beberapa produk berikut ini: Kusen alumunium powder coating Kuse...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Kusen alumunium powder coating Kusen aluminium urat kayu wood grain ...
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Suggestion:
... Kusen aluminium urat kayu wood grain Kaca tempered Kaca laminated K...
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Suggestion:
...rat kayu wood grain Kaca tempered Kaca laminated Kaca es Kaca be...
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Suggestion:
... Kaca tempered Kaca laminated Kaca es Kaca bevel motif Pintu...
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Suggestion:
...pered Kaca laminated Kaca es Kaca bevel motif Pintu swing P...
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Suggestion:
...ted Kaca es Kaca bevel motif Pintu swing Pintu fitting Pint...
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Suggestion:
... Kaca bevel motif Pintu swing Pintu fitting Pintu lipat Pint...
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Suggestion:
...if Pintu swing Pintu fitting Pintu lipat Pintu sliding Case...
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Suggestion:
...ng Pintu fitting Pintu lipat Pintu sliding Casement Jendela...
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Suggestion:
...ng Pintu lipat Pintu sliding Casement Jendela swing Jendela...
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Suggestion:
...lipat Pintu sliding Casement Jendela swing Jendela sliding ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iding Casement Jendela swing Jendela sliding Floor hinge dorma B...
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Suggestion:
... Jendela swing Jendela sliding Floor hinge dorma BTS Floor hinge d...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ela sliding Floor hinge dorma BTS Floor hinge dekkson Siku bolong ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nge dorma BTS Floor hinge dekkson Siku bolong Etalase kaca Compo...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Floor hinge dekkson Siku bolong Etalase kaca Composite panel C...
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Line 24, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...son Siku bolong Etalase kaca Composite panel Curtain wall M...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Etalase kaca Composite panel Curtain wall Melayani pekerjaan lai...
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Line 31, column 25, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: backdrop
...um baja ringan # Wood partisi melamine back drop, cat duco dan HPL # Lambersherink wood...
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Line 52, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...duk Hub : Bpk. Andri WA 0813 2744 6997 ================================= Pi...
^^^
Line 53, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...6997 ================================= Pintu Aluminium Double, Pintu Kaca Jende...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 24.0651302605 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 41.998997996 0% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3686.0 1615.20841683 228% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 597.0 315.596192385 189% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.17420435511 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94303383012 4.20363070211 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89979201107 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427135678392 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1009.8 506.74238477 199% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 535.606846684 49.4020404114 1084% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.090909091 106.682146367 314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.2727272727 20.7667163134 261% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 7.06120827912 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 51.0 4.38176352705 1164% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.849780823735 0.244688304435 347% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166738112895 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.320195296925 0.0667982634062 479% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303483164273 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.330644545672 0.056905535591 581% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.8 13.0946893788 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.39 12.4159519038 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.63 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 201.0 78.4519038076 256% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 9.78957915832 644% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 63.0 10.7795591182 584% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.