Developing countries require international organization's help. Some people prefer financial aid while others think practical aid and advice are better.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Countries need international organization's aid and there are some ways to support them. Some businessmen consider to attract investors and others prefer acquiring some advice and practical help, in order to enrich their goods and trade. From my point of view, foreign companies experience is much more helpful in this trend.
To begin with, money given by international companies is beneficial for country to improve. When money is given by investing, businessmen are able to found new areas of businesses and they can control them by themselves say, choosing a suitable location and construct their buildings, employing workers regarding to their qualification and achieve their business plans. In addition, they can purchase equipments and create design of business which they are willing to do.
On the other hand, some people believe that it is better to get advice or practice skills from experienced ones. After getting practice, company can improve their business by using these strategies and experimenting them and reach to global level. For instance, if 'Samsung" company give advice how to improve " Artel" goods and quality then the company have chance to succeed globally.
In my opinion, it would be more effective if there are education areas like Universities or centres where people from overseas can exchange their precise experience with others. As an illustration, seminars and lectures may be conducted between international companies where they are able to speculate their problems and achievements which may lead to prevent potential troubles and be helpful in improving trades.
To sum up, gaining data and investing money are optimal option to develop an organization or business. However, I believe that educational purposes may be more fundamental part to improve countries economic and globalization.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-05-13 | Jaloladdin07 | 78 | view |
- The chart below gives information on global sale of hybird vehicles between 2006 and 2009
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are increasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them 78
- Nations should spend more money on skills and vocational training for practical work rather than on university education To what extent do you agree or disagree 85
- The chart below gives information on global sale of hybird vehicles between 2006 and 2009
- In the past most people used to travel to their place of work With increased use of computers the internet and smartphones more and more people are starting to work from home
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider attracting'.
Suggestion: consider attracting
... ways to support them. Some businessmen consider to attract investors and others prefer acquiring s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e is much more helpful in this trend. To begin with, money given by internati...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l in this trend. To begin with, money given by international companies i...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...usiness which they are willing to do. On the other hand, some people believe t...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed ones. After getting practice, company can improve their business by using thes...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pany have chance to succeed globally. In my opinion, it would be more effectiv...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., seminars and lectures may be conducted between international companies where th...
^^
Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...les and be helpful in improving trades. To sum up, gaining data and investing mo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, then, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50352112676 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95555544266 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616197183099 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6831742982 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.230769231 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190462910401 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745563958825 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757364764912 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10643912767 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917204586905 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.