In these set of material, the reading mentions some theories for the extinction of Steller’s sea cow which is a huge marine mammal lived in the water around Bering island of the coast of Siberia. And the author provides three reasons of support. However, the professor opposes the author’s claim, he refutes each of the author’s reasons.
First, the passage asserts that sea cow population would have over-hunted by groups of native Siberian people. Because it was a massive animals and a good source of food in such a harsh environment. On the other hand, the professor refutes this theory...
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