Nowadays, many people have various pets, such as dogs, cats, birds and even snakes. I think pets can be members of our family, also I think these relationships are good. I will tell you two reasons to support my opinion.
First, pets can be a best friend. There are no friends very close just like family! Sometimes, we fight and we are very sad about something to our friends, but do not want to tell our friends. Also, sometimes you are very bored, but friends have no time to play with me. In these situations, the pet will be your best friend! Pets will always be with you when you are lonely. In addition, pets will play with you even when we are bored. For example, we are locked down because of covid-19, you can not meet friends, so I am so bored, but my friends said she has a pet, so she is not bored every day.
Second, you can make many memories while growing up with your pet. Many people have had dogs since they were young. Therefore, if you played and slept together from an early age, you will grow together too. Also, if you look back, there are so many memories. For example, my friend grew up with a dog since she was 5 years old. She has a lot of memories with her dog, so my friend says that dogs protect her if she is sick.
I think pets can be great friends. Also, with pets we can make many memories with pets, so I think this relationship is very good. Of course, pets can die earlier than humans, but the period with pets is so meaningful.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Parents are the best teachers Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 89
- People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life Some read some exercise others work in their gardens What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress Use specific details and examples in your answer 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more interesting to read a good book or see a good movie the second time than the first Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 35
- Imagine you need to improve your performance in order to get better grades or higher work payment which way would you choose 1 doing more extra work or assignments that are required2 participate more actively or contributing your own idea more frequentl 60
- Childhood is the happiest time of person s life 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...upport my opinion. First, pets can be a best friend. There are no friends very ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 282.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21985815603 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10845946793 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8440972205 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1111111111 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165943120965 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656150655694 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484995967139 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13045134476 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630854199583 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.17 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 86.8835125448 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.