The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
A glance at the two figures provided elucidates the data on the outdoors touring by British inhabitants in a 4-year interim from 1994 to 1998, with regard to objective of travelling and place of destination. It is apparent that the overall trends in 1994 were aloft in collation to 1998.
As is observed from the first graph, evident is the fact that travel vacation, being the most common purpose of voyage throughout the time frame in question, with 15246 citizens in 1994, accreted by a quarter reaching its pinnacle of 20700 residents in 1998. As for the proportion of commercial tours, an...
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Sentence: As is observed from the first graph, evident is the fact that travel vacation, being the most common purpose of voyage throughout the time frame in question, with 15246 citizens in 1994, accreted by a quarter reaching its pinnacle of 20700 residents in 1998.
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