This report relates to two tables presenting international visits of people living in UK by the reason and places visited by individual regions.
By and large, from 1994 to 1998 holiday was biggest reason to visit abroad whereas due to other reasons people visited internationally the least in the 4 year period. Western Europe was the highest visited place by the UK residents between 1994 to 1998 while north America was the less place were the tourists went from UK in the 4 years.
Starting from holidays, the UK residents chose it as the main purpose to visit abroad and the numbers went on increasing from 94 to 98 i.e from 15,246 to 20,700 respectively. Also, the purpose of business and visits to friends and family was the reason to visit abroad which went on increasing in those 4 years which accounted from approximately 3000 to 4000 people. Other reasons ranked the lowest purpose for the international trip by the UK residents which comprised of 982, increased a bit for 3 years till 1996 and slightly dropped to 999 respectively.
According to the regions visited by the UK residents was western Europe as the main one which consisted of 19371 in 1994 and the trips of people in that region went on rising to 24, 519. North America and the other areas were less visited by UK residents which included around 1000 visits in America and other areas in the year 1994 and the trips in the regions also went on rising approximately 2000 for both the regions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the biggest'.
Suggestion: was the biggest
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Message: Did you mean 'which comprised' or 'which consisted of' or 'which was composed of'?
Suggestion: which comprised; which consisted of; which was composed of
... international trip by the UK residents which comprised of 982, increased a bit for 3 years till 1...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dents was western Europe as the main one which consisted of 19371 in 1994 and the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, whereas, while, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70930232558 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57770588589 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445736434109 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.6563886245 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 151.875 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.25 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0768226825864 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044003287609 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0189793784419 0.0843802449381 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525456366998 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00910098995066 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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