The graph below shows the population of Chile by age group between 1975 and 2035

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The graph below shows the population of Chile by age group between 1975 and 2035

The line graph illustrates Chile's citizens from 1975 to 2035 by age groups starting 0-14 age, 15-64, and above 65 age.

Overall, it is clear that the percentage of 15-64 years old has always dominated whether in the present or the future. it is also evident that the oldest group has grown slowly and is expected to be increased. Meanwhile, the proportion of people under 15 age has been plummeting and is projected to continue to do so.

Looking at the graph, we can see that the percentage of people aged 15-64 started at over 50 percent in 1975, after which it experienced a rise to 70 percent in 2015, before being predicted to drop in 2035. In contrast, the oldest group is the only group projected to continue expanding. it is expected to triple from its share of 5 percent in 1975 to 15 percent by 2035. The proportion of the youngest people constantly reducing. Starting at 40 percent in 1975, it fell to nearly half of that amount in 2025 and is expected to remain in decline all the way through to 2035

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55135135135 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49975309226 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562162162162 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.952547065 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5555555556 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255302818697 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10046571584 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104567714332 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202348848062 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128152991444 0.0819641961636 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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