Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things.
What is your opinion?
Space elicitation is quiet costly and government should pay money for other activites that would be more important. I completely disagree about this issue and this essay will give the reason that why I do not agree that people should not invest for space exploration.
First and foremost, explore the space help people undersand more about our cosmos. Space find is an important document for students, scientists or even aerospace industry. Students learn about our planet every day, what happen if we stop find the aerospace? Off cource that people will not have any information about out world, there will be not any new things about the planets and so on. As a case in point, students will only learn the old things that we have studied before, leading to ignorance of the universe, the path to find a new living planet will also be more difficult.
Secondly, cosmos exploration help people avoid disasters. Explore the universe, people will aware of the impending outer space dangers, then will find the solution to save our life. To illustrate the point, scientists are studying about our universe day by day to know what will happen in the future like asteroid impact, solar storm or Earth's orbit changes,... if we stop this study, there will be many negative things happen in the future that we do not know, lead to serious consequense.
In conclusion, I completely disagree that people stop to invest aerospace, there will be many negative consequense if this opinion happens, leading poor space knowledge, unnanounced disasters,...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...act, solar storm or Earths orbit changes,... if we stop this study, there will be ...
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Line 4, column 192, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...r space knowledge, unnanounced disasters,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0390625 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58600830719 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.316342823 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193650024932 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798910957376 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454720351939 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123599766657 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316375155573 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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