In the modern times, a lot of people accept working in an occupation that they neither have the passion nor a knack for it. There is a reason for this trend and adverse effect to this trend.
In many Asian countries, family pressure can be a factor for them to pick the type of jobs that they do not like. There are a lot of families in many Asian countries that still have traditional thought, in which their children need to have a prestiges jobs such as Doctor, Lawyer, and Engineer. Hence, giving them no choice in choosing their own career path. For instance, in Vietnam, many parents want their children to apply for majors that generate an abundance of wealth.
Forcing people to pick a job that they do not have the passion for will have dire consequences. The person might be resentful towards the occupation and the person that pressures them. Many parents pressure their children to study hard in order to apply for jobs that could give the parent fame and lucrative financial income without caring if the child wants that career or not. Thus, when the child became an adult they would resent the job that they are in and their parents. For example, in 2010, there is a woman who is a famous lawyer, quit her job after 10 years and resents her mother since she does not have the passion for law but her mother for insisting her to follow that career path.
In conclusion, people have a tendency to choose the type of jobs that their parents want. And I would argue that this could have a negative impact in the long term for those people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In the modern times, a lot of people accept working in an occ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49469964664 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18607146826 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512367491166 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0784313484 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8461538462 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242127252598 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953578291073 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571475276687 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168530841909 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041198174655 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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