In the modern times, a lot of people accept working in an occupation that they neither have the passion nor a knack for it. There is a reason and adverse effect to this trend.
In many Asian countries, family pressure can be a factor for them to pick the type of jobs that they do not like. There are a lot of families in Asian countries that still have traditional thought, in which their children need to have prestiges jobs such as Doctor, Lawyer, and Engineer. Hence, giving them no choice in choosing their own career path.
Forcing people pick a job that they do not have the passion for will have a dire consequence. The person might be resentful towards the occupation and the person who had pressured them. Many families pressure their children to study hard to apply for jobs that could give the parents fame and lucrative financial income without caring if the careers are fit for their child or not. Thus, when the child became an adult they would resent the job and their parents. For example, in 2010, there is a woman who is a famous lawyer, quit her job after 10 years and resents her mother since she does not have the passion for law but her mother insists her to follow that career path and forbade from pursuing other professions .
In conclusion, people have a tendency to choose the type of jobs that their parents want. And I would argue that this could have a negative impact in the long term for those people.
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- In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport Disucss both thes 77
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- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51340996169 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20442895593 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8366353524 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212669738494 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856383928158 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559533023808 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145996760334 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313562002114 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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