Life today is easier and more comfortable then it was when your grandfathers were children
Since past few years, major changes has happened in many part of a human life, either it is in the field of technology or having enough opportunity to live a happy life. I strongly agree that our life is more advanced and easier than it was before. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explain in following passage.
First of all, technological advancement has made human life much better then earlier. It is not only in a one particular field, rather than technology is helping people in many sector such as food, medical, communication and so on. For instance, due to the development of computer software, people can handle huge amount of information which they are getting as a result. Further, they can utilize it to find a useful solution in a easier way, which could be not possible with help of a human being. On the other hand, involvement of technology in medical field has not only help to cure deadliest diseases but also help the doctor to perform convoluted operations with help of more efficient machines, which was not available at the time of our grandparent. Hence, our life is much better in comparison to the past due to the invention of advanced devices.
Secondly, since technology has dominated the world, it is also helping to improve employment. Earlier, people were not fortunate enough to have good and secure job in comparison to the people in today's world. For example, as use of software is increasing, companies are getting flood with lot of data, to handle and utilize it properly, software companies require people to get the effective result. Therefore, we can say the people are getting the opportunity to have a good job just because life has change in respect to the requirement of people. Similarly, people are more intellectual then they were before because we can get require resource easily on the online platform. In contrast, education was not free and advance in the early days. Today, anyone can improve themselves without paying a penny either they belong to a wealth or poor family. These changes has indirectly help us to make our like better.
In conclusion I am of the opinion that life is much better than it was before. This because of advancement in technology and because of the opportunity for the people to settle in their life by getting a good job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun part seems to be countable; consider using: 'many parts'.
Suggestion: many parts
...ew years, major changes has happened in many part of a human life, either it is in the ...
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Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ned in many part of a human life, either it is in the field of technology or hav...
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Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y part of a human life, either it is in the field of technology or having enough...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...al advancement has made human life much better then earlier. It is not only in a one partic...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ncement has made human life much better then earlier. It is not only in a one partic...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sector seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sectors'.
Suggestion: many sectors
...er than technology is helping people in many sector such as food, medical, communication an...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nication and so on. For instance, due to the development of computer software, pe...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...utilize it to find a useful solution in a easier way, which could be not possible...
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Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'cure the deadliest'.
Suggestion: cure the deadliest
...y in medical field has not only help to cure deadliest diseases but also help the doctor to pe...
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Line 5, column 591, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...Similarly, people are more intellectual then they were before because we can get req...
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Line 5, column 868, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
... a wealth or poor family. These changes has indirectly help us to make our like bet...
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Line 5, column 883, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
...or family. These changes has indirectly help us to make our like better. In concl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77667493797 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68355141475 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496277915633 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5587987146 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.315789474 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2105263158 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2631578947 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15240691929 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529419252315 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552114120907 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105428402949 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258850517777 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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