Stepping into the 21st century, state-of-the-art technologies have set their foot in almost all spheres of today’s world, not except for being the methods for those who have a hectic work schedule of respecting the culture of other nations. Although this tendency may bring some certain benefits, I would argue that actually traveling is more effective to express appreciation for it.
On the one side of this argument, using technological inventions without leaving the house is thought to be one of the best methods to show a kind of esteem to other countries' cultures. Initially, by visiting through the screen along with sitting in a comfortable chair, travelers can learn more aspects about other countries such as living costs and education through TV commercials to broaden their horizons. Moreover, it is obviously witnessed that it allows almost all tourists who need to know more about other countries such as those who are inundated with high loads of work along with having not good financial conditions can afford.
On the other hand, exploring a nation is one of the keys to showing respect for
its native heritage. Firstly, the more places travelers discover, the more experiences they will get. For instance, this tendency brings chances to meet and interact with local residents so that participants understand more about their traditions along with life expectancy. However, due to living separately from the rest of the world in some tribes, it is impossible to find out all the local civilization of all fields by surfing the internet so explorers need to socialize with them for a period of time to learn about it.
In short, discovering nations helps travelers easily to show a kind of esteem to their cultures. Besides, I do not believe that modern inventions can fully assist them to achieve this desirable aim.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, except for, for instance, in short, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08910891089 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7575555999 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7943804447 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.181818182 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201255769926 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767906253107 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377299427951 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109900179996 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481553230506 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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