Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no shortage of opinions on the allowance of television advertising directed towards young children aged between two and five. Many people have different beliefs about how advertisements in televisions can impact young children’s minds. In today’s world, advertising has become a core component of business. In my opinion, I believe that television advertisements for young children shouldn’t be allowed for two main reasons, which I’ll explore in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, advertisements in televisions can harm young children’s thought process. Their brains may not be matured enough to understand the underlying purpose of a particular advertisement. The advertisements might be fancy enough to convince a young child to get a hold of that product or service. My personal experience is a great example of this. I used to watch a lot of cartoons on television during my early childhood days. I remember that whenever I watch a fancy advertisement, I would start pestering my parents to get me that particular product that was showed on the advertisement, sometimes even without knowing the product’s purpose. The products would range from chocolates, candies, play things to mobile phones, laptops, etc. Even after much convincing from my parents, they had to get me some of these things, due to my obstinate nature. As a result, the advertisements had impacted me in such a way that my mind thought everything was obtainable. Consequently, I didn’t understand the hardships that my parents had to go through to buy me something that I had asked, just due to its fancy advertisement. For this reason, I feel that advertisements should be directed to children when they start understanding the know-hows of particular things in life.
Secondly, advertisements are an important reason for young children to watch television. Some might argue that they are glued to the television due to the cartoons that they watch. But I believe that they start watching televisions for cartoons, and then also get attracted to the advertisements. This is why even during a commercial break in between cartoons, young children don’t take their eyes off the television. Over exposure to television can harm young children’s eyesight at a tender age. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been deeply influenced by my own personal experience. I started watching television for the cartoons, but I became more interested in the advertisements during the breaks. Due to this, I used to watch televisions for close to 2 hours continuously. This in turn impacted my eyesight at the age of 6, and I’ve been wearing spectacles from then on. It’s certainly clear to see that, if there weren’t advertisements directly towards young children, they would take continuous breaks when watching cartoons on the television. This would in fact not degrade their eyesight at a young age.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly agree that there should be no advertisements directed towards children aged between two and five, due to the impact that advertisements could have on their way of thinking and the harm it could cause to their eyesight. For this reason, I would recommend young children and the parents of young children to give importance to the mental ability of children at young age and protection of their eyesight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, i feel, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2835.0 1977.66487455 143% => OK
No of words: 545.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20183486239 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16586668907 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453211009174 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 839.7 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4167369056 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4642857143 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284090981907 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886712605179 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856980511662 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220154650119 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866244944206 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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