You should spend 20 minutes on this task.
You are going to spend some time with your Scottish friend Douglas next Saturday. Write an email to Douglas. In your email, you should:
• Arrange to meet Douglas next Saturday
• Suggest something you could do together
• Say how long you will be able to spend with him
Write at least 120 words. You do not need to include your name and addresses. Your responses will be evaluated in terms of Task fulfillment, Organization, Vocabulary and Grammar.
Dear Douglas,
How are you and your family? I’m extremely delighted to hear that you are going to pay a visit to my hometown next Saturday. Thus, I’m writing this email to make some marvelous preparations for our encounter.
Firstly, as I mention in previous email that I make for sure of picking you up from the airport, so don’t hesitate to call me as soon as your departure land. Don’t forget to type message to me the time you set off. Secondly, you and I will have a two-day trip with a comfortable accommodation in my house. Throughout this fantastic trip, I’m definitely going to take you enjoy outstanding sceneries with enormous paddy fields and yummy street food from vendors round my town. Moreover, I’m sure that playing some traditional outdoor games will be one of the most unforgettable experience in your life. It’s a pity that I can only spend two days with you because I have to come back work next Monday. Truly speaking I really hate the hectic pace of city life, but I have to earn money not just for me, but for my whole family.
Anyway, I’m honestly glad to welcome you to my house. Please write me soon if you need more information. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. See you soon!
Best regard,
James
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-07-30 | janeeeeeeee | 89 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Douglas, How are you and your family? I’m extreme...
^^^
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'comfortable accommodation'.
Suggestion: comfortable accommodation
...you and I will have a two-day trip with a comfortable accommodation in my house. Throughout this fantastic ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...ward to hearing from you. See you soon! Best regard, James
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g from you. See you soon! Best regard, James
^^^
Line 6, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou. See you soon! Best regard, James
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, firstly, honestly, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64125560538 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49487802037 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645739910314 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4444414764 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9285714286 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310798016084 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113603303225 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048162078949 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238828247048 0.12726935374 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440352330255 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.