Most children learn and grow through their surroundings. Among the surroundings, children are most influenced by their parents. Therefore, many people claim that parents are the best teachers. I strongly agree with this suggestion. I will tell you three reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, parents know their children best. Each child has a different style of study. However, the school does not match one by one because it has to teach many children at a time. Therefore, in school, many students give up when the study is harder. On the contrary, at home, many children rely on their parents when they study because their parents give them the right study style for their children. Especially in school, students who can not study often give up, but their parents do not give up until the end. In fact, I saw an article in the newspaper that parents taught their child whom the teacher gave up and got a perfect score on the national college entrance exam.
Next, children learn more from their parents than teachers. We learn the most important communication from our parents from an early age. In this process, you learn a lot of things indirectly, such as the way your parents speak and behave. In addition to these things, they also correct wrong habits, give life lessons and they broaden our mind so that we can think about our future. For example, I used to have a habit of biting my nails, but my parents scolded me a lot, so I got rid of that habit.
Last, parents teach us with love. Teachers are of course very dedicated and hardworking for us, but they are giving us a job. However, parents teach us with only infinite love without wishing for anything. That is why it is impossible to compare. For instance, my friend’s mom came to pick her up after taking her to a two hour drive because my friend wanted to go to an English academy.
To sum up, parents are the best teachers, because parents know our best, children learn more from their parents than teachers and parents teach us with love. I decided to listen to the best teacher’s parents better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, of course, such as, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68021680217 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38892847064 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523035230352 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0748431757 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9583333333 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.375 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196823987556 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650713038829 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635575362327 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126597969986 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610514255053 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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