At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people.
Every age group of people are important for a country. The ratio of young to old people might vary depending upon various factors, in some countries the population of young people is much higher than that of old people, while the reverse is true in few others. At first glance, having a relatively large number of young people, seems to have more advantages, but on deeper dive it appears to have some downsides as well. This essay will discuss both the perspectives.
To begin, having a higher young adult population is equivalent to a higher working population. This in turn will lead to better economy and hence aid in development of the country. In this tech age, it becomes important for countries to stay on par with the ever evolving and newer technologies. It is seen that the younger generation is open to such changes and adapt it into their daily lives without any hesitation, due to which there is a rise in the standards of living. For instance, India is one such developing country, which has a higher young population. When rate of the growth of other countries is compared to India, it is seen that India tops the list. Economists suggests this is majorly due to this ratio proportion of age groups.
Despite the positive arguments, there is a downside to this. With more young people, there is bound to be a lack of experience in all aspects of the society, like in the field of politics where experience rather than the knowledge is what matters, in order to solve the real time problems of the society like recession and war. Likewise, there are some ancient values and virtues that have been passed from generations together, with this kind of imbalance in population, there is a possible gap in imparting the knowledge.
In conclusion, there appears to be both positive and negative sides to this, however the advantages clearly outweigh the disadvantages.
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Suggestion:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83950617284 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70718953372 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546296296296 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7059546478 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237347312855 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609120715424 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696611355082 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117033857177 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110269950915 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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