Some people prefer to live in the country. Others prefer to live in the town or big cities. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Since the dawn of humanity, the importance of living place has heated debates among people, and the controversial question of whether families live in cities or countrysides has always been taken into consideration. Although some people are inclined towards this idea that the best place for living is the quiet and uncrowded one, As far as I’m concerned the advantages of a big city life outweigh those of the country life. In the following essay. I will elaborate on my point of view through two remarkable reasons.
To begin with, the most significant reason is that no one cast the shadow of doubt on the fact that in this competitive and progressive world where we live, technology plays a pivotal role in many aspects of human life. Admittedly, having access to state-of-art facilities can pave the way for the upbringing of children, and they have great opportunities to boost their potential abilities. For example, there are many gyms around cities for different types of sports which, by attending, children can find their talents and make a progress in their life. On the other hand, the lack of recreational equipment and advanced technology harm rural people, and their children have no chance to flourish and make a breakthrough in their life.
Furthermore, no one can deny the impact of living places on human beings’ health. It is axiomatic fact that the city has a high level of hygiene in comparison with the country. Thanks to the revolution of science in all subject areas, in medicine, in particular, there is a plentiful number of experienced doctors who can cure many dangerous diseases. Nowadays, all of the big cities are taking advantage of advanced and fully equipped hospitals and health centers that provide various services for people. on the contrary, countryside families are suffering from a lack of doctors and appropriate medical service, which cause many problems to their health.
In conclusion, based on all the aforementioned reasons, I strongly hold the opinion that cities are a better site to live compared with rural, because towns not only provide suitable conditions for children to grow and find their ability, but cities also have a huge number of doctors and hospitals which is essential of everyone’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...hildren can find their talents and make a progress in their life. On the other hand, the l...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...cure many dangerous diseases. Nowadays, all of the big cities are taking advantage of adva...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...at provide various services for people. on the contrary, countryside families are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in particular, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07238605898 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81599114898 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573726541555 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3436006789 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.142857143 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6428571429 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143901286703 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459702463995 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450548840019 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096175608825 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414759114882 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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