It is imperative, in today’s world, to develop an ‘all-round’ approach to any kind of social or national issue. Such an approach necessitates that people reach a consensus amongst themselves even if they are of varied opinion. The prompt presents us with the controversial issue as to whether discussions reach the most progressive common ground when the group is homogeneous or whether it does so, when people with ‘contrasting’ viewpoints sit together. In my opinion, I mostly agree that progress is significantly more when people with different opinions, reach consensus on a particular issue, through debate and discourse, as it encourages them to consider others’ perspectives and invokes insightful knowledge which one have not thought of earlier.
The fact that peer review often helps to judge the efficacy of a particular hypothesis, theory or concept is adequately present in history. Looking back at the scientific discoveries that have led to immense technological advancements, one can easily say that an informed discussion on scientific arguments between people of opposing views lead to discovering of pertinent fallacies of previous theories. For example, the evolution of quantum mechanics, as it started from Young’s double slit experiment had led to the discovery of quantum mechanics. Furthermore, it has served to show Newtonian mechanics, which was earlier deemed to be the conclusive law governing movement of physical bodies, has incomplete. It had also led to establishment of wave-particle duality of light, which was earlier believed to be only of particulate nature. Thus, it can be seen that people with opposing viewpoints, based on their observations often lead to newer discoveries in the field of scientific research. As such, such peer-review is encouraged even today when important discoveries are reported.
Even in forming policies that dictate the operation of nations, governments present their viewpoints of social importance which are then contradicted by opposition politicians and through debate and discourse, the viability and their detrimental effects on society is highlighted. Finally, through a vote of majority amidst the concerned members of the House, a decision is taken based on whether the proposed policy serves best to the interest of the nation or does it prove to be deleterious. Had it been that the government’s policies are always unanimously supported by all members of the House, people would not be aware of the drawbacks that such policies entail. As opposed to dictatorship, democracies are often praised because of their structure which caters to opposing viewpoints, since it allows each individual to present their own opinion rather than admitting to a set of rules set by an absolute authority.
Indisputably, it is important that people involved in the discussion of a particular issue are well informed and knowledgeable to the extent that they understand the severity of the issue and its context. For example, an historian and a scientist can not possibly argue on whether the atomic model ubiquitous today is correct or not. Under such circumstances, the view of the scientist will be upheld considering that the historian is not well adept to scientific developments over the years and how each theory presented has stood the test of time and has been well corroborated by other scientists. However, in a matter related to agriculture, a debate between them as to whether rapid industrialization of agricultural processes eventually serves to be beneficial will serve to show how historically industrialization has been fruitful, from the historian’s perspectives and how newer technology will uplift the conditions of farmers, from the scientist’s perspectives. Eventually, both of their viewpoints will enable people take an informed decision on whether industrialization of agricultural methods will be helpful or not.
In conclusion, progress is always achieved when people with differing viewpoints debate over an overarching issue. This helps in highlighting the pros and cons of each course of action, enabling thought provoking scenarios which might not have crossed people’s minds. However, to ensure the effectiveness of such debate and discourse, it is important that the opposing viewpoints are from people who are well informed about the issue being questioned. Hence, I mostly agree with the prompt, insofar as the people undertaking to discuss any controversial issue are well acquainted with its overarching parameters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...resents us with the controversial issue as to whether discussions reach the most progressive ...
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Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...the issue and its context. For example, an historian and a scientist can not possi...
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Line 4, column 668, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...d to agriculture, a debate between them as to whether rapid industrialization of agricultural...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 106.0 58.6224719101 181% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3846.0 2235.4752809 172% => OK
No of words: 697.0 442.535393258 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51793400287 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.13816675137 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28035783667 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 334.0 215.323595506 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479196556671 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 1181.7 704.065955056 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5906558023 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.25 118.986275619 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0416666667 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54166666667 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143639201639 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426825121546 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376774368042 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888157884134 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464304857926 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 14.1392134831 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 201.0 100.480337079 200% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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