TPO 27 Integrated Writing Task
The reading passage explores the origin of the Little Ice Age, and several reasons are given in support of this argument. Although the points mentioned in the passage seem reasonable, the lecturer casts doubt on them for the following reasons.
To begin with, even though the reading passage suggests that the Gulf stream can disrupt the temperature, leading to the cooling in the surrounding areas. The lecturer argues that it is a misconception. This is because the Gulf stream can only be influential in North America and Europe, which means that the Gulf stream probably has nothing to do with this freezing period, which occurs around the world.
Second, the lecturer concurs that the dust of volcanic eruptions might cover the atmosphere and lower the temperature, as suggested in the article. Nevertheless, he believes that dust is not strong enough to promote this cooling climate. Furthermore, with the aim of establishing a solid and concrete explanation, he points out that there are no reports regarding the invisibility of local scenarios, caused by volcanic dust.
Last but not least, the lecturer acutely identifies the weakness in the reading passage that the drastic decrease in human population results in less deforestation and fewer greenhouse gases effect. The lecturer asserts that there isn’t enough time for the effect mentioned in the article to kick in. In addition, he alleges that, in fact, the human population can rapidly recover to its ordinary level, which might bring about more deforestation for the cultivation of crops. Accordingly, the abundant forests mentioned in the article are not able to induce the cold situation.
Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
---|---|---|---|
2023-12-10 | Apolytos | 70 | view |
2022-08-30 | Allenwlh | 80 | view |
2021-08-11 | Kamyar Mirzaei | 80 | view |
2021-08-09 | suyun | 80 | view |
2021-02-25 | alibenvari | 80 | view |
- TPO 50 Integrated Writing Task 70
- sea cow extinction theory 80
- Inhospitable Venus 80
- TPO 48 Integrated Writing Task In recent years many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment These population declines and extinctions have serious consequences for the ecosystems 80
- Glass windows harming birds 80
No. of Words: 267 250
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 25 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 267 250
No. of Characters: 1358 1200
No. of Different Words: 151 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.042 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.086 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.685 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.316 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.36 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.36 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 4