It is customary for some students to avoid difficult subjects such as maths and philosophy. Hence these shouldbe optional . How far do you agree to this statement
Every student has his/her own interests as well as learning abilities. Some students excel in science and technology whereas others succeed in learning maths and philosophy. It is often stated that tougher subjects like maths and philosophy should not be made mandatory. I too partially agree to this school of thought.
Admittedly, for a student who wants to be a language tutor, may not require mathematical abilities. Similarly, doctors and engineers will not benefit from philosophy. It is unlikely that our school system follows the syllabus which comprises these subjects for all students irrespective of their passion. it would be apt if the curriculum focuses on the major subjects based on every student's career aspiration. Moreover, In my country , educational system is due for its update. It is too old for younger generation.
However, Subjects like philosophy teaches life skills for a student. Omitting this subject completely from a student's curriculum will result in behavioral problem , without which he/she could become a potential threat to our society. Further, aptitude skills is key to flourish in any field. Subject such as mathematics will improve students intellects and it will make to think out-of-the-box. To exemplify, some of the companies recruit individuals who posses mathematical skills compounded with high moral values.
To conclude, as per the statement "No knowledge is waste", students need to learn life skills such as philosophy as well as mathematical skills, at least, until their high school education even though it may not relate to their future career. So I agree to the essay statement only to a certain extent.
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how do i improve this essay,
how do i improve this essay, to get band 7?
The first step, try to write
The first step, try to write 350 words with 200 different words. and try to have 5 paragraphs:
paragraph 1: introduction. Your ideas/opinions here.
paragraph 2: Admittedly, there are some advantages of side A. First, ... Second, ...
paragraph 3: However, still I support side B. reason 1 + why reason 1 + example for reason 1 + a small conclusion for reason 1.
paragraph 4: In addition, reason 2 + why reason 2 + example for reason 2+ a small conclusion for reason 2.
paragraph 5: conclusion.
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aptitude skills is key to flourish
aptitude skills are the key to flourish
flaws:
No. of Words: 265 350
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 265 350
No. of Characters: 1361 1500
No. of Different Words: 165 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.035 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.136 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.768 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 85 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.562 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.811 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.295 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.5 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.055 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5